WARNING: Surprisingly enough this is my opinion :OOO
Okay, so right off the bat, I can hear you sampled the song, by adding in a somewhat generic house beat over the guitar in the beginning. It's okay I guess.
Nice placement of the vocal samples. It's pretty funny :P
This drop suffers from a lack of direction, it seems so random, and the sound design could be a lot better. Those supersaws seem week, they need some detuning and more reverb. It also needs more bass, in my opinion.
Nice placement of Rito's screams! :P
I got bored around the second part of the drop. It seems like it lacked variation from the first part.
I really like this piano part, it's my favorite part of the song.
Aw, I was expecting a second drop. That was very AntiClimactic :C
Overall: The song is pretty unique, I have to say. And it's very funny that you placed the vocal samples in. But there were lots of issues I had with the drops, mainly because they seemed bland and lacked power. That could be achieved by better sound design, more bass, and compression. Also, it needed a second drop. I think the end leaves people a little disappointed, since it builds up a lot to nothing. I understand you aren't an expert at this, neither am I. I probably can't do much better than this. But I think this deserves a good 3 stars. Cya Etzer! :D
Your mate,
~Z