The start seems bland, needs more noises. The sound design of the synth could be better too
I like the arp.
I feel like this beginning is too repetitive. It needs more stuffs 8)
The drop is not bad, I don't like the synth to much, but thats just me.
Overall this is really repetitive, but maybe thats just because the original didn't give you much melodic elements to work with.
Another drop. I think you should bring in more of a dubstep-ish snare
I really like this bell lead!! It fits well with the arp. Add a violin or something and it would sound awesome :D
The drop could have used some white noise in the buildup and more at impact. (same goes for the other 2)
Overall, you've got a pretty neat track. It's not amazing, a lot could be worked on. It's repetitive, needs some better sound design (that may just be me), and could use more instruments/background noises if you know what I'm talking about. 3/5 mate :)