You must use logic... I recognize the risers and boomer FX. The one at 2:00 is boomer FX 26 and it's only available in logic :P Unless you use Garageband, but I'm pretty sure garageband only has FX up to 9 or something XD
Anyways, neat song. It could use some work in the area of mixing and mastering, and it's also pretty repetitive. I r8 3.5 m8 8)
This beginning is very ambient.... I like that organic-sounding pad.
Oh yes I like the orchestral elements. Very bone chilling.... anndd here the goosebumps come :P
I like the choir in the BG
This would be good to fall to sleep to XD There isn't much going on so it's pretty boring but then again it's an ambient song, so I won't dock any stars for that.
Ahhh the signature Xtrullor bass 8)
And no drop... pretty anticlimactic and disappointing. But I get that you can't make dubstep, so I won't dock stars for that either XD
Overall: It sounds professional, Not much mixing/mastering to improve in this track. Overall it's pretty nice. But it's pretty boring and there's no drop. I won't dock stars for those because of what I said before.
Nice job m8 :P
-Z
I really like the beginning right off the bat. It's super catchy!
This part seems to have a lot of bass for a part before the drop...
Nice buildup!
The drop wasn't anticlimactic but I still expected more /: Maybe some more percussion?
Like this part, nice plux m8 :P
Again, a lot of bass before the drop. I usually keep my sub basses out of everything except drops so when the drop comes it's richer and more powerful.
Same advice as before for drop :P
I LOVE how you take out all the bass at this part with just the pad and plucks. Sounds nice.
And, the end.
Overall, great track. Very little you could improve on. It isn't overly exciting, kind of repetitive. But drum and bass tracks are usually like that lol XD
Good job morph!! :P
-Z
It's kinda weird, the noises are pretty annoying tbh but I know this is a WIP so I won't dock stars for that :P
Well sadly now it's crashed, I can't remaster the individual instruments, so that can't be fixed now... Anyway, could you PM me telling me which part exactly is annoying, 'cause other people are saying it's annoying but I don't hear anything annoying. High grating frequencies don't tend to bother me as much as they do other people, and sometimes I don't even notice them...
I can tell you used all logic sounds in this song just from hearing the beginning. XD
You might want to try and make your own sounds, presets are a good way to learn but making your own sounds is much more fun.
Oooo... I hear some apple loops in there. Using premade loops can get you banned in the future. In fact, you may want to remove all your songs that use them... don't worry, I used to do the same thing :P
It's a pretty catchy song, I will give you that. Nice for a castle themed level.
Overall, It's nice for a video game. Maybe not so much for geometry dash, since that game is really fast paced and (being a creator), I probably wouldn't be inspired by it XD But that Doesn't matter.
MOST IMPORTANTLY: NEVER upload sounds with premade loops to new grounds. As it says before you upload, new grounds is a place for original works only!
Take my advice constructively and not personally mate :D
Ummm.. I don't have logic.
Also, I know about making your own sounds... It is fun!
Thanks for your advice anyhow!
Edit: Also... I use my own loops. I make almost 99% of them. Also, newgrounds says COPYRIGHTED loops. I knew since I started that was totally against the rules. Thanks for the warning, though.
Edit 2: Yah IK about geo dash... It might not be the best for the game...
Beginning could use more background noise... and that finger snap seems a bit loud.
I like the flute, it's catchy.
Those risers sounds like apple ones :P
The drop is out of place, could use a lot more build up, and there isn't enough impact and white noise.
That finger snap is still kind of annoying...
Yes, you definitely used logic to make this! I know that bass! Sharp wobble bass, right?
And those basses are kind of out of place.
I like the bells.
Over all, it's catchy, and happy. But there are some mixing issues that you could work on next time you make a song. Also, one recommendation: Don't put "Geometry Dash Cut" in the title. It's unnecessary and kinda annoying XD
I hope you use my advice to your benefit next time you make a song, don't take any of this personally! Good luck mate. :D
Again... I DON'T EVEN HAVE LOGIC! :P
Edit: TO MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY, 90 percent of the reason I add Geometry Dash cut is because it gets 10 times more popular, and way quicker. If there was a better system... I would use that instead.
so awesome <3
YES you uploaded it to NG!! :D These songs are amazing, better than you usually hear on NG. Good job mate :)
Thank you m9 <3
Dude, this is actually really good. Here are some things that you could fix though!
The snare. It's too loud. It drowns out the bass a bit, especially in the second drop.
The ambience/background noise. I know I told you that you should have a lot of it, but I think that it goes on a bit to long in the beginning.
Other than that, I think this is an amazing track. Well done, Etz!
-Z
DUDE! By far this is your best track. I can't believe what I'm hearing. I haven't heard one thing that sounds off... The melody is amazing! The vocals are also awesome. Great singer, she is. I also like that Dubstep at 2:30. It fits nicely :D I love this so much. <3
-Z
Thank you so much dude! Her vocals in the original were my inspiration lol
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