Interesting :P It even sounds like lockyn (Is that what you were going for?)
The instruments are pretty nice, although I don't really like this square lead at the drop.
Overall you did an amazing job mastering this track. Nice one Karaplex!! ;D
Interesting :P It even sounds like lockyn (Is that what you were going for?)
The instruments are pretty nice, although I don't really like this square lead at the drop.
Overall you did an amazing job mastering this track. Nice one Karaplex!! ;D
thanks for the feedback mate :D
WOW!! Locked this is purely amazing. Your style is so unique and happy. I really really like this one, good job mate!! :D
<3 thanks man!
I like this piano <3
The classic Geoplex plucks. Give me the chills!
This is pretty unique for a house track.
Theres a bit to much bass for a part before the drop.
The drop is weird... not sure how I feel about it. But I'm sure other people would like it.
The placement of the plucks in the mix feel wierd but maybe thats just me
The first drop is 7/10
I like this buildup!
Second drop already. I like how you side chained in this track.
I like how you added a lil dubstep bass in there :P
Overall not bad. Second drop 8/10 (cuz you added some stuff I liked)
Nice track GeoPlex. Good to know you're not dead, and still making nice some solid works.
<3,
-Z
Thanks man. Not sure specifically what you mean about the drops, but this was definitely a bit experimental for me (really tried to not use any reference tracks this time and go in my own direction, haha.)
Thanks for the feedback :)
Nice beginning... it sounds like a typical song from you lol
it's catchy :P
I like this piano. Pianos are kewl 8)
Te pluk is also kewl
that background piano thats kinda eq'd out could use a little less bass... it sounds weird.
I like the build up.
Drop needs a sub bass... It's not the best of your drops.
Progression is good :D
This part kinda varies from the beginning and thats good
I like this piano part. Nice and peaceful.
Another nice buildup.
Wasn't expecting that snare pattern lol
Again drop needs sub bass.
It's a pretty good track! I can tell you mastered it well because it's pretty loud. It seems pretty generic, but there isn't much wrong with that. Mostly I'd say it could be a little bit more energetic and use more bass. Thats probably just me but whatever, I hope you take my advice as constructive xD You usually give my songs massive reviews... Idk how but I'm doing my best here :P
gud job m8.
-Z
The sub is too low.. but it's there. I will work harder on the bass aspect of my tracks. The piano is sidechained, not EQd but okay.
Thanks again Z!!! Better reviews come with more experience, but you got most of the points that the track needs improvement on, so that's good.
It's kinda weird, the noises are pretty annoying tbh but I know this is a WIP so I won't dock stars for that :P
Well sadly now it's crashed, I can't remaster the individual instruments, so that can't be fixed now... Anyway, could you PM me telling me which part exactly is annoying, 'cause other people are saying it's annoying but I don't hear anything annoying. High grating frequencies don't tend to bother me as much as they do other people, and sometimes I don't even notice them...
I can tell you used all logic sounds in this song just from hearing the beginning. XD
You might want to try and make your own sounds, presets are a good way to learn but making your own sounds is much more fun.
Oooo... I hear some apple loops in there. Using premade loops can get you banned in the future. In fact, you may want to remove all your songs that use them... don't worry, I used to do the same thing :P
It's a pretty catchy song, I will give you that. Nice for a castle themed level.
Overall, It's nice for a video game. Maybe not so much for geometry dash, since that game is really fast paced and (being a creator), I probably wouldn't be inspired by it XD But that Doesn't matter.
MOST IMPORTANTLY: NEVER upload sounds with premade loops to new grounds. As it says before you upload, new grounds is a place for original works only!
Take my advice constructively and not personally mate :D
Ummm.. I don't have logic.
Also, I know about making your own sounds... It is fun!
Thanks for your advice anyhow!
Edit: Also... I use my own loops. I make almost 99% of them. Also, newgrounds says COPYRIGHTED loops. I knew since I started that was totally against the rules. Thanks for the warning, though.
Edit 2: Yah IK about geo dash... It might not be the best for the game...
Beginning could use more background noise... and that finger snap seems a bit loud.
I like the flute, it's catchy.
Those risers sounds like apple ones :P
The drop is out of place, could use a lot more build up, and there isn't enough impact and white noise.
That finger snap is still kind of annoying...
Yes, you definitely used logic to make this! I know that bass! Sharp wobble bass, right?
And those basses are kind of out of place.
I like the bells.
Over all, it's catchy, and happy. But there are some mixing issues that you could work on next time you make a song. Also, one recommendation: Don't put "Geometry Dash Cut" in the title. It's unnecessary and kinda annoying XD
I hope you use my advice to your benefit next time you make a song, don't take any of this personally! Good luck mate. :D
Again... I DON'T EVEN HAVE LOGIC! :P
Edit: TO MAKE EVERYONE HAPPY, 90 percent of the reason I add Geometry Dash cut is because it gets 10 times more popular, and way quicker. If there was a better system... I would use that instead.
YES you uploaded it to NG!! :D These songs are amazing, better than you usually hear on NG. Good job mate :)
Thank you m9 <3
DUDE! By far this is your best track. I can't believe what I'm hearing. I haven't heard one thing that sounds off... The melody is amazing! The vocals are also awesome. Great singer, she is. I also like that Dubstep at 2:30. It fits nicely :D I love this so much. <3
-Z
Thank you so much dude! Her vocals in the original were my inspiration lol
Nice chill DnB. I've never heard a chill DnB track, and with the exception of GeoPlex of course. But so really like this one. Everything flows perfectly. Good job guys 8)
I'm glad you enjoyed mate - cheers :)
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