Okay, so first off, there are quite a bit of mixing issues. The instruments should be sidechained to allow the drums more room in the mix. The bass in the kick is also clashing with the low end of other instruments because of this.
I also notice you used loops, specifically the "Imminent Danger Pluck Lead" and Imminent Danger Laser Lead" from GarageBand, just to name a couple. I know this because I used to fool around with loops a lot (I also double checked). You did a good job with the composition nonetheless, You should try to make your own sounds neat time tho :)